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People in your area are having problem! with their internet connection. Write a letter to the company which providei the connection.

People in your area are having problem! with their internet connection. Write a letter to the company which providei the connection. kGBR
Dear sir/madam, I am writing this letter in order to complain about your internet services in the region where I live. I live in 14th street Tehran, and we are experiencing both connection and speed rate issues. We have contacted your costumer services and explained the problems to the operator days ago on February 18th, however, nothing has been done yet. Regarding to pandemic conditions, many people's jobs including children's schooling is affected by the internet connection and the problems explained above are causing dissatisfaction and major problems in people's lives. It would be helpful if you could send some professionals to the area to check and run diagnostic tests to identify the problem and then hopefully fix the possible issues. As we did not have proper connection, as promised, we demand a lower internet charge for the previous month. We look forward to hearing from you. Faithfully, Helia Zare
Dear sir/madam, I am writing this letter in order to complain about your internet services in the region where I
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live
. I
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live
in 14th street Tehran, and we are experiencing both connection and speed rate issues. We have contacted your costumer services and
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explained
the
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problems
to the operator days ago on February 18th,
however
, nothing has
been done
yet
.
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pandemic conditions,
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many
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people
's jobs including children's schooling is
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affected
by the internet connection and the
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problems
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explained
above are causing dissatisfaction and major
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problems
in
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people
's
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lives
. It would be helpful if you could
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send
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some
professionals to the area to
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check
and run diagnostic
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tests
to identify the
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problem
and then
hopefully
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fix
the possible issues. As we did not have proper connection, as promised, we demand a lower internet charge for the previous month. We look forward to hearing from you.
Faithfully
,
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Helia
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Zare
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IELTS letter People in your area are having problem! with their internet connection. Write a letter to the company which providei the connection.

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  American English
1 paragraphs
149 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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