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Write a letter to your manager about your work from last year. Include What you did What you think you could improve A training request

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Dear Sir, I am writing this letter to inform you about the work I did last year and how it had helped me grow skills in my current field of profession. Last year, I was appointed as the Brand Manager for several high-level brands and was tasked with managing all of their marketing deliverables. It was a job of a lifetime that gave me the opportunity to work with some of the best minds of our generation. However, I felt that I lacked certain human management skills during my little tenure and like you know I would love to improve on that. Which is why I would like to make you a training request that would require your assistance and grooming me so that I can improve on my said skills. Yours Faithfully, Akshit Mehta.
Dear Sir,

I am writing this letter to inform you about the work I did last year and how it had
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helped
me grow
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skills
in my
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current
field of profession.

Last year, I
was appointed
as the Brand Manager for several high-level brands and
was tasked
with managing all of their marketing deliverables. It was a job of a lifetime that gave me the opportunity to work with
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some
of the best minds of our generation.

However
, I felt that I lacked certain human management
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skills
during my
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little
tenure and like you know I would
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love
to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
improve
on that.

Which is why I would like to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
you a training request that would require your assistance and grooming me
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so
that I can
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improve
on my said
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skills
.

Yours
Faithfully
,

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IELTS letter Write a letter to your manager about your work from last year. Include What you did What you think you could improve A training request

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  American English
7 paragraphs
135 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.5
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    Present relevant ideas
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