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Write a letter to your local newspaper. In your letter explain where you live describe the problem give reasons why you do not want this development

Write a letter to your local newspaper. In your letter explain where you live describe the problem give reasons why you do not want this development p52qa
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing with regard to an article published in your newspaper on 18th October that outlined the local administration's plan to make the local airport bigger and add more flights to the schedule. I believe if this plan is carried out, the problems which local residents already face would be aggravated. My house is located within 15 minutes walk from the airport and life here is already tough due to frequent flights, noise created from those flights and traffic congestion as an indirect result. The low-flying aeroplanes are utterly noisy and disruptive. They create harsh noise and we have a hard time concentrating on our work or sleep peacefully at night. Sadly, I often woke up by the late-night flights and many children and elderly citizens in our area are suffering from high-stress levels, tinnitus, hearing loss, sleep disturbances, and other harmful effects. I am afraid that the expansion of the airport would reduce the area for the playground and a park which is under construction near the airport. The traffic condition would deteriorate with more people using the airport and that would decline the standard of living in this area. Considering all the negative consequences, I strongly disagree with the plan to expand the airport area and increase the flight number. I would really appreciate if you could possibly write an article about the problems this initiative is likely to cause. Thank you in advance. Yours faithfully, Andrew Heywood
Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing with regard to an article published in your newspaper on 18th October that outlined the local administration's plan to
make
the local
airport
bigger and
add
more
flights
to the schedule. I believe if this plan
is carried
out, the problems which local residents already face would
be aggravated
.

My
house
is located
within 15 minutes walk from the
airport
and life here is already tough due to frequent
flights
, noise created from those
flights
and traffic congestion as an indirect result.

The low-flying
aeroplanes
are
utterly
noisy and disruptive. They create harsh
noise and
we have a
hard
time concentrating on our work or sleep
peacefully
at night.
Sadly
, I
often
woke up by the late-night
flights
and
many
children and elderly citizens in our area are suffering from high-
stress
levels, tinnitus, hearing loss, sleep disturbances, and other harmful effects.

I am afraid that the expansion of the
airport
would
reduce
the area for the playground and a park which is under construction near the
airport
. The traffic condition would deteriorate with more
people
using the
airport
and that would decline the standard of living in this area.

Considering all the
negative
consequences, I
strongly
disagree with the plan to expand the
airport
area and increase the
flight
number. I would
really
appreciate if you could
possibly
write an article about the problems this initiative is likely to cause.

Thank you in advance.

Yours
faithfully
,

Andrew Heywood
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IELTS letter Write a letter to your local newspaper. In your letter explain where you live describe the problem give reasons why you do not want this development

Letter
  American English
9 paragraphs
244 words
6.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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