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Dear Director I am writing to apply for a position english teacher at school in Kattaqurgan district. I have graduated foreign Samarqand State Foreign Language University in 2014. I can speak english fluently. I know 5 skills very well becouse I have been working language course since 2020 however I do not stop learning language. I took cefr degree last year Firstly. I am sociable person and I like children very much. I enjoy working with children
Dear Director I am writing to apply for a position
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english
teacher at school in
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Kattaqurgan
district. I have graduated foreign
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Samarqand
State Foreign Language University in 2014. I can speak
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english
fluently
.
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I
know 5
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skills
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very
well
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becouse
I have been working language course since 2020
however
I do not
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stop
learning language.
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I
took
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cefr
degree last year
Firstly
.
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I
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am sociable
person and I like children
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very
much.
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I
enjoy working with
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children
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IELTS letter Apply a position a teacher at school

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
76 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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