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Write a letter to your landloard when you rented an apartment a year ago, and your landloard won't return your deposit.

Write a letter to your landloard when you rented an apartment a year ago, and your landloard won't return your deposit. J0da0

Dear Smith, I am doing well. Hope you and your family are doing great. My name is Louis Fabian, and you remember me. I rented on your apartment in 304B at riverside. I lived there a previously year and left the place last month. I am writing this regard to informed you that you didn't refund my payment till now. Which, I deposited as a security, while signed on an agreement. As, you know I have completed my study and now that, I moved back to my hometown. I left your residence in good condition. Consequently, according to your commitment the amount is refundable, but you didn't return it. Even I noticed you in pervious letter or you didn't take it seriously. So that, Once again I asking you get back money as soon as possible. If you are not willing to co-operate with me than I am afraid to take legal action against you and the court will be decide to the whole matter. I am looking forward to hearing your response. Yours Sincerely, Louis Fabain.

Dear Smith, I am doing well. Hope you and your family are doing great. My name is Louis Fabian, and you remember me. I rented on your apartment in 304B at riverside. I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :resided
lived
 there a You used an adverb ('previously') instead of an adjective, or a noun ('year') instead of another adjective.
previously year
 and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :departed
left
 the place last month. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 am writing this regard to informed you that you didn't refund my payment till This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
. Which, I deposited as a security, while signed on an agreement. As, you know I have completed my study and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
 that, I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :relocated
moved
 back to my hometown. I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :departed
left
 your residence in This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 condition. Consequently
, according to your commitment the amount is refundable, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 you didn't return it. Even I noticed you in Possible spelling mistake found.previous
pervious
 letter or you didn't take it seriously
. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
So
 that, Once again I asking you This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 back money as This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
 as possible. If you are not willing to co-operate with me than I am afraid to take legal action against you and the court will be Consider using the past participle "decided"?decided
decide
 to the whole matter. I am looking forward to hearing your response. Yours Sincerely
, Louis Possible spelling mistake found.FabienFabianFab ain
Fabain
. 