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Hi, all good morning yesterday one incident had happened. The needle stick injury to one of our patient's caregivers, she is not enough skilled. The incident had happened when his son wants to give an insulin shot, he had given a shot he removed the needle tip kept over the table. Then the caregiver has started clearing those needles with bare hands slide them into the bin, unfortunately, she got a prick. I suggested her immediately go and wash her hand under the running tap. She did it. In my opinion, this might need proper education for our caregivers.

Hi, all good morning yesterday one incident had happened. The needle stick injury to one of our patient's caregivers, she is not enough skilled. The incident had happened when his son wants to give an insulin shot, he had given a shot he removed the needle tip kept over the table. Then the caregiver has started clearing those needles with bare hands slide them into the bin, unfortunately, she got a prick. I suggested her immediately go and wash her hand under the running tap. She did it. In my opinion, this might need proper education for our caregivers. pJpod
Hi, all good morning yesterday one incident had happened. The needle stick injury to one of our patient's caregivers, she is not enough skilled. The incident had happened when his son wants to give an insulin shot, he had given a shot he removed the needle tip kept over the table. Then the caregiver has started clearing those needles with bare hands slide them into the bin, unfortunately, she got a prick. I suggested her immediately go and wash her hand under the running tap. She did it. In my opinion, this might need proper education for our caregivers.
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morning yesterday one incident had happened. The needle stick injury to one of our patient's caregivers, she is not
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skilled. The incident had happened when his son wants to give an insulin shot, he had
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a shot he removed the needle tip
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over the table. Then the caregiver has
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clearing those needles with bare hands slide them into the bin, unfortunately, she
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got
a prick.

I suggested her immediately go and wash her hand under the running tap. She did it.

In my opinion, this might need proper education for our caregivers.
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IELTS letter Hi, all good morning yesterday one incident had happened. The needle stick injury to one of our patient's caregivers, she is not enough skilled. The incident had happened when his son wants to give an insulin shot, he had given a shot he removed the needle tip kept over the table. Then the caregiver has started clearing those needles with bare hands slide them into the bin, unfortunately, she got a prick. I suggested her immediately go and wash her hand under the running tap. She did it. In my opinion, this might need proper education for our caregivers.

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