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You need to take a leave from your work of over one month for personal reasons. Write a letter to your boss. In your letter:

You need to take a leave from your work of over one month for personal reasons. Write a letter to your boss. In your letter: R2GoY
Dear Mr. Tyagi, I am Sfurna Patel, the senior executive of Designing Department of ongoing 'Southern Heights' project at California. I am writing this letter to request you to grant me a leave of one month that is from 22nd August to 23rd October. I need to take this leave for the following reasons. The primary reason for asking for leave is that my grandmother who resides in Toronto have to undergo heart surgery in upcoming days and it is suggested that she takes a complete bedrest for at least 20 days. Meanwhile someone is needed to attend her all time. As my grandmother is staying with my brother it would be more convenient if I stay there to look after her. As far as work is concerned, I have asked Junior Designer, Mr. Kumar, to keep me updated with structural and conceptual brief. I will scrutinize the design concepts thoroughly and revert with necessary changes. In addition, I have also worked out design strategy beforehand and had shared every details with team members. In my absence Mr. Kumar will be incharge of design apects and will manage to generate all required drawings. In case of any query I will be in contact through e-mail. I will be highly obliged if you understand my situation and give me positive response. Yours sincerely, Sfurna
Dear Mr.
Tyagi
, I am
Sfurna
Patel, the senior executive of Designing Department of ongoing 'Southern Heights' project at California. I am writing this letter to request you to grant me a
leave
of one month
that is
from 22nd August to 23rd October. I need to take this
leave
for the following reasons. The primary reason for asking for
leave
is that my grandmother who resides in Toronto
have to
undergo heart surgery in upcoming days and it
is suggested
that she takes a complete
bedrest
for at least 20 days.
Meanwhile
someone
is needed
to attend her
all time
. As my grandmother is staying with my brother it would be more convenient if I stay there to look after her.

As far as work
is concerned
, I have asked Junior Designer, Mr. Kumar, to
keep
me updated with structural and conceptual brief. I will scrutinize the design concepts
thoroughly
and revert with necessary
changes
.

In addition
, I have
also
worked out design strategy beforehand and had shared every
details
with team members. In my absence Mr. Kumar will be
incharge
of design
apects
and will manage to generate all required drawings.
In
case of any query I will be in contact through e-mail.

I will be
highly
obliged if you understand my situation and give me
positive
response.

Yours
sincerely
,
Sfurna
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IELTS letter You need to take a leave from your work of over one month for personal reasons. Write a letter to your boss. In your letter:

Letter
  American English
5 paragraphs
222 words
6.0
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