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write a letter to the organisers of the course

write a letter to the organisers of the course Yg03m

Dear Sir, I am Hazel and I write this letter to you because of advertisement about the Memory Course. In my opinion, this course will be accommodate with me. For the reason, recently some of my memory functions are impaired and I forget things rapidly. I cannot endure the bad memory anymore. So I would like to take this course. Before taking the therapist I would like to know more about the methods that you will use for me to make sure that it suits. Besides, this course is very crucial to me because in the next few week I will have a big project with a worldwide reputation company. Furthermore, please explain about the fees and dates as soon as possible. The fees slightly high is fine, too. I am gradually flush so I can splurge all those. Lastly, thank you for all your ultimate collaborate. Sincerely

Dear Sir,

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because
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course
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some
 of my memory functions are impaired
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. I cannot endure the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :evil
bad
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So
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. Furthermore
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please
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explain
 about the fees and dates as This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
 as possible. The fees slightly
 high is fine, too. I am gradually
 flush This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 I can splurge all those. Lastly
, thank you for all your ultimate collaborate.

Sincerely