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You are working overseas. You need to return to your country urgently for a family issue. Write a letter to your boss. In your letter,  request the time off  explain the family issue and why you have to go immediately  tell the boss when you will come back to work

You are working overseas. You need to return to your country urgently for a family issue. Write a letter to your boss. In your letter,  request the time off  explain the family issue and why you have to go immediately  tell the boss when you will come back to work 75l9k
Dear Mr. jobs, I am writing to request a time off for a week because of a problem in my personal life. As you remember, I am a foreign employee in your company, as well, except for my nuclear family, the rest live in Iran. I received an email from my sister 2 days ago which was described a sad issue. She said that our grandfather had involved covid19, moreover, his health got deteriorate step by step so if you don’t see him, you might have not had a chance for visiting our grandfather again. Honestly, I would like to see him once again due to he has had a main role in my life. Therefore, I hope you believe me and let me leave my position for a week. If you accept, I will go to my country the day after tomorrow and certainly, I will be ready in office by 12th of august. It is always a pleasure doing work with you. Best regards, Erfan barazandeh
Dear Mr. jobs,

I am writing to request a time off for a week
because
of a problem in my

personal
life.

As you remember, I am a foreign employee in your
company
,
as well
,
except for
my nuclear family, the rest
live
in Iran. I received an email from my sister 2 days ago which was
described
a sad issue. She said that our grandfather had involved
covid19
,
moreover
, his health
got
deteriorate step by step
so
if you don’t
see
him, you might have not had a chance for visiting our grandfather again.

Honestly
, I would like to
see
him once again due to he has had a main role in my life.
Therefore
, I hope you believe me and
let
me
leave
my position for a week.

If you accept, I will go to my country the day after tomorrow and
certainly
, I will be ready in office by 12th of august.

It is always a pleasure doing work with you.

Best regards,

Erfan
barazandeh
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IELTS letter You are working overseas. You need to return to your country urgently for a family issue. Write a letter to your boss. In your letter,  request the time off  explain the family issue and why you have to go immediately  tell the boss when you will come back to work

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  American English
9 paragraphs
167 words
6.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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