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write a letter to your house owner to appologize and explain why you cannot attend the event.suggest another date when you could meet him

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Dear Mr. Jason, I am occupying one of your properties on Oxford street. Thank you for your invitation to the tenant meeting to be held on the 25th of October. However, I am unable to attend it due to some other commitment. I am afraid that on the same day, I have several interviews to be conducted. Even though I tried my best to postpone the event, this is not possible; hence we have already received the confirmations from the candidates. Nevertheless, I would be happy to meet you personally and get the updates on the meeting. I am available on the 27th and the 28th of October. If one of those dates is convenient for you, please let me know. You can contact me on the telephone or email address above. I hope the meeting is a great success and everyone will be pleased with your new decisions. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Vasanthi Srikanes
Dear Mr. Jason,

I am occupying one of your properties on Oxford street. Thank you for your invitation to the tenant meeting to
be held
on the 25th of October.
However
, I am unable to attend it due to
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
other commitment.

I am afraid that on the same day, I have several interviews to
be conducted
.
Even though
I tried my best to postpone the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
event
, this is not possible;
hence
we have already received the confirmations from the candidates.

Nevertheless
, I would be happy to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
meet
you
personally
and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
the updates on the meeting. I am available on the 27th and the 28th of October. If one of those dates is convenient for you,
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
please
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
let
me know. You can contact me on the telephone or email address above.

I hope the meeting is a great success and everyone will be
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
pleased
with your new decisions. I look forward to hearing from you.

Yours
faithfully
,

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Srikanes
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IELTS letter write a letter to your house owner to appologize and explain why you cannot attend the event. suggest another date when you could meet him

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7 paragraphs
159 words
6.0
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