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Thanks for showing us the online exhibition. It breaks the limitations of time and

Thanks for showing us the online exhibition. It breaks the limitations of time and 1Vl6X
Dear Ms. Hanna Suihko, Thanks for showing us the online exhibition. It breaks the limitations of time and geography so that we have an access to see so many excellent posters. It is so amazing! May I ask if there are some ways like social media or pictures to provide us to see the outdoor exhibition outside of Malva at Päijänteenkatu 9, Lahti? Congratulations and best wishes for the exhibition! Best regards,
Dear Ms. Hanna
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Congratulations and best wishes for the exhibition!

Best regards,
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