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Write a letter to a friend,asking for her advice

Write a letter to a friend, asking for her advice bQPaB

Dear Carrie, I'm writing to you in such a depressing mood that I've never been through before. My parents don't allow me to go on our holiday as we planed. They wanted me to stay home and study. Let's figure down how to convince them to let me go on the trip, and I need your advice. The only problem here is that they kept saying that I need extra preparation even though I'm already well-prepared for it. I just can't stand it when thinking that we have to cancel our dream trip to Dalat - the thing that we have always talk about.

Dear Carrie,

I'm writing to you in such a depressing mood that I've never been through This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
. My parents don't This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorize
allow
 me to go on our holiday as we planed. They wanted me to stay home and study. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorize
Let
's figure down how to convince them to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorize
let
 me go on the trip, and I need your advice.

The This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 problem here is that they This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :retained
kept
 saying that I need extra preparation even though
 I'm already well-prepared for it.

I This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
 can't stand it when thinking that we This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
 cancel our dream trip to Possible spelling mistake found.DaleyALATDalai
Dalat
Consider using an m-dash if you do not want to join two words.—
-
 the thing that we have always Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: "talked".talked
talk
 about. 

IELTS letter Write a letter to a friend, asking for her advice

Letter

American English

4 paragraphs

104 words

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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1

4.0

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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One main idea per paragraph
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Include an introduction and conclusion
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Support main points with an explanation and then an example
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical Resource: 6.0

Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 5.0

Answer all parts of the question
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Present relevant ideas
Fully explain these ideas
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Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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