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You are going on vacation. Write a letter to your neighbour asking him/her to take care of your house in your absence.

You are going on vacation. Write a letter to your neighbour asking him/her to take care of your house in your absence. XDaRO
Dear Mrs Brooke, I hope you are fit as a fiddle and jubilant as always. Last week, I mentioned to you that I am going to room for few days and you are dealing to look after my residence. In regard to the specific, my husband already left a dog at my mother‘s house so you do not need to worry of its food but the gardeners comes every alternative days which is due over morrow. Rest everything is a place and require no further assistance. One thing which is of utmost priority, please check my mailbox daily between 5: 48 PM Very significant letter from my workplace is on its way, I waited today and yesterday but owing to the frequent rain has delayed the service. I will be leaving tonight only at midnight. Hope it wouldn’t be troublesome to come and leave my keys. I thank you need bronze and certainly will send you the postcard feel free to tell me what would you love the most to have, a gift from me for you from Rome. Take good care of you. Warm Wishes. Gyh
Dear Mrs Brooke,

I hope you
are fit
as a fiddle and jubilant as always. Last week, I mentioned to you that I am going to room for few days and you are dealing to look after my residence.

In regard to the specific, my husband already
left
a dog at my mother‘s
house
so
you do not need to worry of its food
but
the gardeners
comes
every alternative days which is due over morrow. Rest everything is a place and require no
further
assistance. One thing which is of utmost priority,
please
check
my mailbox daily between 5: 48 PM
Very
significant letter from my workplace is on its way, I waited
today
and yesterday
but
owing to the frequent rain has delayed the service.

I will be leaving tonight
only
at midnight. Hope it wouldn’t be troublesome to
come
and
leave
my keys. I thank you need bronze and
certainly
will
send
you the postcard feel free to
tell
me what would you
love
the most to have, a gift from me for you from Rome. Take
good
care of you.

Warm Wishes.
Gyh
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IELTS letter You are going on vacation. Write a letter to your neighbour asking him/her to take care of your house in your absence.

Letter
  American English
5 paragraphs
186 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 6.5
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