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This is part of an email you receive from an English pen-friend, Sandy. I'm coming to your country next month on holiday. Where do you think I should go and why are those places interesting? What's the best way for me to travel around?

This is part of an email you receive from an English pen-friend, Sandy. I'm coming to your country next month on holiday. Where do you think I should go and why are those places interesting? What's the best way for me to travel around? PM8eX

Hi Sandy, I'm really pleased you're coming to visit my country. The first place to visit is Qaem-Shahr, a city full of gardens and rice fields. Also, the jungle is beside the city; Therefore you can enjoy cycling in the jungle. You should take a taxi from the airport to come to the city. Also, the fares are very affordable; therefore you can travel around by taxi. You can enjoy spending time with the warm blood people of Koutena, a village up in the hills. This village is famous for its orange gardens and rice paddies. Also, if you like ducks, Koutena has a lot of water reservoirs which you can find colorful wild ducks there. After visiting Koutena, you can enjoy swimming in the spring which is located in the woods near the village Sheikh-Raje. This village is 20 minutes far from Koutena if you have a car. I never knew that crabs could live in the jungles until I saw some of them near that spring. Also, you can find beautiful birds and dragonflies there. You can experience boat riding in the Lafour dam and enjoy watching the sunset by the river. If you like food, you are coming to the right place. There's a lot of delicious traditional foods at reasonable prices. Try sour chicken with rice and Caviar in the restaurant Kolbeh-ye-Mahi too. It's very delicious.

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