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I am writing to request a follow-up for Ms Jane who needs further assessment and management for sexually transmitted diseases and blood born viruses along with a discussion of possible contraceptive methods. Initially, on 18 th September 2008 she presented with concerns regarding her weight gain which is suspected due to the contraceptive effect and requested a Paps smear test. Consequently, the test was taken. On her subsequent visit three days later, she and her partners have been informed regarding her positive test result for chlamydia. she has been commenced on azithromycin and advised not to have sexual contact after a week of treatment. Socially, she has the habit of smoking 15 cigarettes a day and drinks 2 glasses of wine on weekends. Her sexual history reveals that she is not sure about monogamous sexual practice and had sexual contact with her new partner 14 days ago. Kindly note that she is on oral contraceptive pills for the last 12 months. It would be appreciated if you could educate regarding contraceptive methods. Please examine, assess, and treat her as deemed appropriate. Kindly contact me if you have any queries regarding Ms Jane.
I am writing to request a follow-up for Ms Jane who needs
further
assessment and management for
sexually
transmitted diseases and blood born viruses along with a discussion of possible
contraceptive
methods.

Initially
, on
18 th
September 2008 she presented with concerns regarding her weight gain which
is suspected
due to the
contraceptive
effect and requested a Paps smear
test
.
Consequently
, the
test
was taken
. On her subsequent visit three days later, she and her partners have
been informed
regarding her
positive
test
result for chlamydia.
she
has
been commenced
on azithromycin and advised not to have
sexual
contact after a week of treatment.

Socially
, she has the habit of smoking 15 cigarettes a day and drinks 2 glasses of wine on weekends. Her
sexual
history reveals that she is not sure about monogamous
sexual
practice and had
sexual
contact with her new partner 14 days ago. Kindly note that she is on oral
contraceptive
pills for the last 12 months.

It would
be appreciated
if you could educate regarding
contraceptive
methods.
Please
examine, assess, and treat her as deemed appropriate.

Kindly contact me if you have any queries regarding Ms Jane.
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192 words
6.0
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