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Dear Nick, It’s been a while since I’ve heard from you. Thank you very much for your last letter. It was great to hear from you after so many months. I’m really excited, because I would like to practice my knowledge. I would be grateful if we could email each other. I’m successful student from Georgia and I want to practice my English. I study at ILLIA State University. I have some hobbies for example watching films. I often go to the cinema or watch films at home. I would appreciate if I could tell more about my lifestyle. Last holiday I visited Rome, It was wonderful. I would be interested to receive further details about could we meet sometime in the future or not? It would be lovely to hear your news when you have time to write. All the best, Luka
Dear Nick,

It’s been a while since I’ve heard from you. Thank you
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very
much for your last letter. It was great to hear from you after
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so
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many
months. I’m
really
excited,
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because
I would like to practice my knowledge. I would be grateful if we could email each other.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
’m successful student from Georgia and I want to practice my English.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
study at
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ILLIA
State University.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
have
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some
hobbies
for example
watching films.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
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often
go to the cinema or
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watch
films at home.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
would appreciate if I could
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
tell
more about my lifestyle. Last holiday I visited Rome, It was wonderful.

I would
be interested
to receive
further
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details
about could we
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
meet
sometime in the future or not?

It would be lovely to hear your news when you have time to write.

All the best,

Possible spelling mistake found.
Luka

IELTS letter this is what information can i give about me

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
142 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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