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Dear Nick, It’s been a while since I’ve heard from you. Thank you very much for your last letter. It was great to hear from you after so many months. I’m really excited, because I would like to practice my knowledge. I would be grateful if we could email each other. I’m successful student from Georgia and I want to practice my English. I study at ILLIA State University. I have some hobbies for example watching films. I often go to the cinema or watch films at home. I would appreciate if I could tell more about my lifestyle. Last holiday I visited Rome, It was wonderful. I would be interested to receive further details about could we meet sometime in the future or not? It would be lovely to hear your news when you have time to write. All the best, Luka

Dear Nick,

It’s been a while since I’ve heard from you. Thank you This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 much for your last letter. It was great to hear from you after This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 months. I’m really
 excited, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 I would like to practice my knowledge. I would be grateful if we could email each other.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
’m successful student from Georgia and I want to practice my English. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 study at Possible spelling mistake found.IliaIL LIAILL IA
ILLIA
 State University. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 have This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 hobbies for example
 watching films. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:frequently
often
 go to the cinema or This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :monitor
watch
 films at home. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 would appreciate if I could This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :inform
tell
 more about my lifestyle. Last holiday I visited Rome, It was wonderful.

I would be interested
 to receive further
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :particulars
details
 about could we This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :attain
meet
 sometime in the future or not?

It would be lovely to hear your news when you have time to write.

All the best,

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Luka