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Some business leaders are coming to your town to find out more about the shopping facilities. You have been asked to write a report for the leader of the group. Your report should: Explain what are the most popular types of shop in your town. Include ideas for how the shopping facilities can be improved.

Some business leaders are coming to your town to find out more about the shopping facilities. You have been asked to write a report for the leader of the group. Your report should: Explain what are the most popular types of shop in your town. Include ideas for how the shopping facilities can be improved. 5k8qD
Dear Manager, I am writing a report about leaders are coming to my town to find out more about the shopping facilities. I survey that most groceries are acting in the area. Almost have business relevant brach food and beverage. Especially, the range barbecue takes up a large proportion. Our company is business in food and beverage too. However, if we are too late for involvement in this market. Instead of, the one potential that has not been explored yet but I find that it will be a strong development in the future. That is organic food. In my research have practiced since 2019. Demand for clean food is increasing day by day. Have 70 percent of the people live here with high income. They are pleasure ready to pay the high cost for their health. Besides, we will be the supply unit in this place with no competitors. Moreover, the building common here is an apartment. I suppose that not only we build the block grocery but also develop fast shipping service. Make all the convenience for patrons. To sum up, organic food is a potential field with many opportunities. Sincerely, SOAP
Dear Manager,

I am writing a report about leaders are coming to my town to find out more about the shopping facilities. I survey that most groceries are acting in the area. Almost have business relevant
brach
food
and beverage.
Especially
, the range barbecue takes up a large proportion. Our
company
is business in
food
and beverage too.
However
, if we are too late for involvement in this market.
Instead
of, the one potential that has not
been explored
yet
but
I find that it will be a strong development in the future.
That is
organic
food
. In my research have practiced since 2019. Demand for clean
food
is increasing day by day. Have 70 percent of the
people
live
here with high income. They are pleasure ready to pay the high cost for their health.
Besides
, we will be the supply unit in this place with no competitors.
Moreover
, the building common here is an apartment. I suppose that not
only
we build the block grocery
but
also
develop
fast
shipping service.
Make
all the convenience for patrons.

To sum up, organic
food
is a potential field with
many
opportunities.

Sincerely
,

SOAP
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IELTS letter Some business leaders are coming to your town to find out more about the shopping facilities. You have been asked to write a report for the leader of the group. Your report should: Explain what are the most popular types of shop in your town. Include ideas for how the shopping facilities can be improved.

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  American English
5 paragraphs
192 words
6.5
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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