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moved to new home 1. explain 2. describe 3. invite

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Dear Max, Its' been ages since I've last heard from you. I hope this letter finds you in good health. I am writing this letter to inform you that I moved to a new apartment next to my office. As you know, my old house was far away from the office and commuting took long hours. Consequently, decided to shift nearby to organization and I must say that the new home is convenient. The bedrooms are spacious with attached bathrooms and balcony. Kitchen is the most amazingly designed and I love spending my time there. Besides, there are many amenities to utilize as the convenient under ground car parking, fitness center, modern security system. In addition, a courtyard to host the guests. Moreover, they are establishing a new dining feature just a few steps away. Well, what are your plans this weekend? Why don't you come visit us, we can have a great time together with your family. I hope to see you this week. Keep in tune. Lots of love,
Dear Max,

Its'
been ages since I've last heard from you. I hope this letter finds you in
good
health. I am writing this letter to inform you that I
moved
to a new apartment
next
to my office.

As you know, my
old
house
was far away from the office and commuting took long hours.
Consequently
, decided to shift nearby to organization and I
must
say that the new home is convenient. The bedrooms are spacious with attached bathrooms and balcony. Kitchen is the most
amazingly
designed and I
love
spending my time there.

Besides
, there are
many
amenities to utilize as the convenient under ground car parking, fitness center, modern security system.
In addition
, a courtyard to host the guests.
Moreover
, they are establishing a new dining feature
just
a few steps away.

Well, what are your plans this weekend? Why don't you
come
visit us, we can have a great time together with your family.

I hope to
see
you this week.
Keep
in tune.

Lots of
love
,
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IELTS letter moved to new home 1. explain 2. describe 3. invite

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
171 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
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