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inviting for surprise party for your friend sad from homesick, reason for the party, date and time, what classmate could bring to the party

inviting for surprise party for your friend sad from homesick, reason for the party, date and time, what classmate could bring to the party e3nP7

Dear Allan, Hope all is well with you, I am just writing to let you know that we're throwing a surprise party for Sandy on her birthday next Sunday. As you know, Sandy looked for the last weeks depressed, and she always speaks about her parents and how much she missed them, she is suffering from homesickness, and with this party she may get along with us. The plan is as follows, Pamela is going to ask Sandy to eat dinner next Sunday at 8 PM, there we will be having everything set and ready, then after she enters the restaurant we show up with the cake and happy birthday song. Untill now, I've invited 4 people to the party and I got there acceptance, so, why don't you invite Steve and Sam for the party? they're going to enjoy it, they are also with Sandy in the study group. Let me know if you can make it. Warm wishes, Amr

Dear Allan,

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Warm wishes,

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