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Write a letter to your friend to request him to find a part-time job for you

Write a letter to your friend to request him to find a part-time job for you joQ9p

Dear Jay, I am so excited to share the good news that I have got admission to the same university in which you are now enrolled and I am coming to Australia on the 2nd of July 2021 for my master's degree in business, which is two years fully funded scholarship base program. As you know Melbourne is a relatively expensive city to live in, I believe to bear my expenses I may have to find a part-time job once I reach there, thus I need a favour from your side, I will be appreciative to you if you could help me to find out employment. I will be grateful to you if you could apply to some part-time job at any retail shop near your accommodation or if it's possible to talk to your manager about any available part-time job available for me, At least I can request you without any hesitation I believe as you are my one of the best school friend, who always stands by my side in difficulties. I hope to see you very soon. give my regards to your parents. Warm wishes Jack khan

Dear Jay,

I am This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 excited to share the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 news that I have This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquired
got
 admission to the same university in which you are This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).enrolled, and
enrolled and
 I am coming to Australia on the 2nd of July 2021 for my master's degree in business, which is two years fully
 funded scholarship base program.

As you know Melbourne is a relatively
 expensive city to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reside
live
 in, I believe to bear my expenses I may This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
 find a part-time job once I reach there, thus
 I need a Possible spelling mistake. 'favour' is British English.favor
favour
 from your side, I will be appreciative to you if you could In informal texts, 'to' is not necessary. Do you mean "help me find"?help me find
help me to find
 out employment.

I will be grateful to you if you could apply to This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 part-time job at any retail shop near your accommodation or if it's possible to talk to your manager about any available part-time job available for me, At least I can request you without any hesitation I believe as you are my one of the best school friend, who always stands by my side in difficulties.

I hope to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witness
see
 you This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterGive
give
 my regards to your parents.

Warm wishes

Jack khan