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Write a letter to a friend who is visiting your country for the first time. - Tell him the best time of the year to come. - What places they could visit - Invite them to come to your house

Write a letter to a friend who is visiting your country for the first time. - Tell him the best time of the year to come. - What places they could visit - Invite them to come to your house LBq31

Dear Richard I hope that this letter find you in great health and radiant. You told me that you would come to my nation and so I’m informing you about my country. The India has a mixture of time and six variation of times come each and every year and each for 2 months. Therefore, October and November are the best months to visit there because the average temperature is maintained approximately 15. Moreover, some places are opened at that time which have been closed due to too much cold. A number of famous places are in my country and one of the seven wonders, the Tajmahal is located in the Agra city of Uttar Pradesh. Also, several temples could be visited which are related to the ancient times and ever temple has their history. My home is situated in the Kurukshetra and this place was named after the war of Mahabharata, thus you could visit here. Specifically, you’r being invited to my home and you have to stay at least one week with me. I hope that this information would be beneficial for you. Yours lovingly Elaine.

Dear Richard

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 places are opened
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cold
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famous
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Tajmahal
is located
 in the Agra city of Uttar Pradesh. Also
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 which are related
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times
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ever temple
 has their history.

My home is situated
 in the Possible spelling mistake found.
Kurukshetra
 and this place was named
 after the war of Mahabharata, thus
 you could visit here. Specifically
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you’r
being invited
 to my home and you This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
 stay at least one week with me.

I hope that this information would be beneficial for you.

Yours lovingly


Elaine. 