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Write a letter to a friend who is visiting your country for the first time. - Tell him the best time of the year to come. - What places they could visit - Invite them to come to your house

Write a letter to a friend who is visiting your country for the first time. - Tell him the best time of the year to come. - What places they could visit - Invite them to come to your house LBq31
Dear Richard I hope that this letter find you in great health and radiant. You told me that you would come to my nation and so I’m informing you about my country. The India has a mixture of time and six variation of times come each and every year and each for 2 months. Therefore, October and November are the best months to visit there because the average temperature is maintained approximately 15. Moreover, some places are opened at that time which have been closed due to too much cold. A number of famous places are in my country and one of the seven wonders, the Tajmahal is located in the Agra city of Uttar Pradesh. Also, several temples could be visited which are related to the ancient times and ever temple has their history. My home is situated in the Kurukshetra and this place was named after the war of Mahabharata, thus you could visit here. Specifically, you’r being invited to my home and you have to stay at least one week with me. I hope that this information would be beneficial for you. Yours lovingly Elaine.
Dear Richard

I hope that this letter find you in great health and radiant. You
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come
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nation and
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I’m informing you about my country.

The India has a mixture of
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time
and six variation of
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times
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come
each and every year and each for 2 months.
Therefore
, October and November are the best months to visit there
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because
the average temperature
is maintained
approximately 15.
Moreover
,
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some
places
are opened
at that
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time
which have
been closed
due to too much
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cold
.

A number of
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famous
places are in my country and one of the seven wonders, the
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Tajmahal
is located
in the Agra city of Uttar Pradesh.
Also
, several temples could
be visited
which
are related
to the ancient
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times
and
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ever temple
has their history.

My home
is situated
in the
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Kurukshetra
and this place
was named
after the war of Mahabharata,
thus
you could visit here.
Specifically
,
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you’r
being invited
to my home and you
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have to
stay at least one week with me.

I hope that this information would be beneficial for you.

Yours
lovingly


Elaine.
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IELTS letter Write a letter to a friend who is visiting your country for the first time. - Tell him the best time of the year to come. - What places they could visit - Invite them to come to your house

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
188 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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