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visiting hometown email to friend

visiting hometown email to friend p5bbd

Hi First of all a warm hug for my dear friend. We haven't seen each other for a long time although I hope you are doing well. I must admit I am delighted that holidays are coming and you will visit my hometown! Recently, you have asked me a lot of questions about my living place. It seems you are curious about my home town. My home town 'Gdynia' lies in northern Poland and on the Baltic Sea coast. My city is part of a conurbation with the spa town of Sopot, the city of Gdańsk, and suburban communities, which together form a metropolitan area called the Tricity. It means that we will have plenty of things to do and a lot of places to visit. I have some suggestions what is crucial for me to show you. Anyway, it is up to you and I hope you will make up decision what would you like to see. I would love to show you Gdynia Sea Towers, impressive building near the seashore. As far as I know, you are a true fun of rugby. I have a surprise for you! I bought two tickets for rugby match which will take place in National Stadium Rugby in Gdynia. I guess you can't wait. There is much more things to see but I can't reveal all of the activities as I have prepared some suprise. I attached some photos of my City and most popular monuments. Looking forward to see you! Xyz

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