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Write a letter to the head of market committee to collect wastage on daily basis.

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Dear Manager, Market committee, Patti. I, am writing this letter to you for sending an employee to collect dust from MY house. My house is situated in your municipal area, comes under your jurisdiction, near the office of municipal building. It is wonderful, to be noted, that, your employee has not been coming for collection dust and wastage from my house for last week. I, want you, to inform that, serious of diseases has been increasing in our area, and are badly affecting to the life of people in the surrounding, and people are suffering from the foul smell, and It also affecting the children while on the way to school. I, request, to your please solve my problem on first priority. Hope, you will consider my request genuinely and I, shall, be thankful for your this kindness. Your faithful RANJIT
Dear Manager, Market committee, Patti. I,
am
writing this letter to you for sending an employee to collect dust from MY
house
. My
house
is situated
in your municipal area,
comes
under your jurisdiction, near the office of municipal building. It is wonderful, to
be noted
, that, your employee has not been coming for collection dust and wastage from my
house
for last week. I, want you, to inform that, serious of diseases has been increasing in our area, and are
badly
affecting to the life of
people
in the surrounding, and
people
are suffering from the foul smell, and It
also
affecting the children while on the way to school. I, request, to your
please
solve my problem on
first
priority. Hope, you will consider my request
genuinely
and I, shall, be thankful for your this kindness. Your faithful
RANJIT
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IELTS letter Write a letter to the head of market committee to collect wastage on daily basis.

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  American English
1 paragraphs
140 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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