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a friend is thinking about going on a camping holiday for the first time this summer

a friend is thinking about going on a camping holiday for the first time this summer 3AgjN

Dear Ahmed, i's really great to hear from you again. I think that you'd enjoy the camping holiday because it will add to you so much things, so you would end up with a lot of skills like team work and it will build an immune trust in your self, it will also motivate the creative thinking and strengthen you communication skills. You will come back home with a different interests. Don't be surprised if you wouldn't find it as you thought, maybe the commander would be responsible for every step you make and you would find your self controlled more than you think. Your team mates may not be supportive. By the way there is a possibility to come back home without felling that you had an addition to your self. I'm telling you this because you should predict every thing could happen through your camping interval. For me, I'd like to participate this summer in this camp. I have participated in many organized camps an I have acquired a lot of experience as well as I found it really an amazing thing to escape the cold in my state. I am sure that we would enjoy our camp and assure that it would reflect a lot of great aspects to your personality. I can't wait to hear from you Your friend, Odai

Dear Ahmed,

i's really
 great to hear from you again. I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
 that you'd enjoy the camping holiday This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 it will This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accrue
add
 to you This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
Use "many" with countable nouns.many
much
 things, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 you would This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
 up with This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
a lot of
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :proficiencies
skills
 like team work and it will build an immune trust in your self, it will also
 motivate the creative thinking and strengthen you communication This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :proficiencies
skills
. You will This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approacharrive
come
 back home with a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:various
different
Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean "interest"?interest
interests
.

Don't be surprised
 if you wouldn't find it as you This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonedassumedbelievedconsidered
thought
, maybe the commander would be responsible for every step you This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 and you would find your self controlled more than you This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
. Your This expression is normally spelled as one or with hyphen.team-matesteammates
team mates
 may not be supportive. By the way there is a possibility to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approacharrive
come
 back home without felling that you had an addition to your self. I'm telling you this This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 you should predict every thing could happen through your camping interval.

For me, I'd like to participate this summer in this camp. I have participated in This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 organized camps Possible typo. Did you mean "an" or "I"?anI
an I
 have acquired This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
a lot of
 experience as well
 as I found it really
 an amazing thing to escape the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :chillyfrosty
cold
 in my state. I am sure that we would enjoy our camp and assure that it would reflect This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
a lot of
 great aspects to your personality.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 can't wait to hear from you Your friend, Possible spelling mistake found.DAIOAIODAPIODASODI
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