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Write a letter to your friend to ask him/her to develop a website for your business.

Write a letter to your friend to ask him/her to develop a website for your business. bba8P

Dear Evi, How are you? I hope you and John are doing well. I can’t believe it’s been 2 years since our last vacation together! I have been really busy with the new shop and thanks to word of mouth, sales are going great! In fact, I have even decided to have a website created for the store. Would you be interested in creating the site for me? As you know, my store sells handmade silver jewelry. I have extended the range of products to include other handmade items like ceramic figurines. I want the site to really capture the feeling of the store, which as you probably remember is kind of exotic, with souvenirs from my travels around the world. Since I update my merchandise regularly, the site will need to reflect that. I have recently bought a very high quality camera and some studio equipment so I am able to photograph the products myself. I just need you to set the site up and upload new photographs as they become available. Do you think you can do this? I’d love to hear your thoughts! Of course, I don't expect you to work for free; you'll have to charge me what you would charge any client, regardless of our friendship. I am really excited for this new adventure. I hope to hear from you soon! Love, Jane

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How are you? I hope you and John are doing well. I can’t believe it’s been 2 years since our last vacation together!

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
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 for me?

As you know, my store sells handmade silver jewelry. I have extended the range of products to include other handmade items like ceramic figurines. I want the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsectionspotscenestationlocationhome
site
 to really
 capture the feeling of the store, which as you probably
 remember is kind of exotic, with souvenirs from my travels around the world.

Since I update my merchandise regularly
, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsectionspotscenestationlocationhome
site
 will need to reflect that. I have recently This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchased
bought
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very
 high quality camera and This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 studio equipment This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
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just
 need you to set the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsectionspotscenestationlocationhome
site
 up and upload new photographs as they become available.

Do you This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
 you can do this? I’d This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :admireadore
love
 to hear your thoughts! Of course
, I don't This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :anticipate
expect
 you to work for free; you'll This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
 charge me what you would charge any client, regardless of our friendship.

I am really
 excited for this new adventure. I hope to hear from you This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
!

This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :admireadore
Love
,

Jane