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Application letter for the job as an English teacher advertised in newspaper

Application letter for the job as an English teacher advertised in newspaper nRBxe
Dear Sir or Madam, I am very interested in your advertisement in today's local newspaper and I would like to apply to be am member of your school team. As you saw my CV I am thirty-two years old and obtained a degree of a teacher of English as a second language at University in 2012. I feel I have many of the important qualifications needed for this job. I am presently working at school number 18 in Margilan where I have been an English teacher since 2019. I am able to speak two languages - English and Russian besides my native language. I am so sociable and able to get on with new peole easily. I am an ensuasistic and energetic employee and I bealive I absalutelly manage the job advertised by you. I would be gratefull if you could consider me for this position. As I am too eager to accept to your team, I am forward to calling me the interview anytime convinient to you. Your faithfully, Oripov Jakhongir
Dear Sir or Madam, I am
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interested in your advertisement in
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's local newspaper and I would like to apply to be am member of your school team.

As you
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my CV I am thirty-two years
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and obtained a degree of a teacher of English as a second language at University in 2012. I feel I have
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of the
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important
qualifications needed for this job. I am
presently
working at school number 18 in
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Margilan
where I have been an English teacher since 2019.
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I
am able to speak two languages
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English and Russian
besides
my native language.
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I
am
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so
sociable and able to
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on with new
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peole
easily
.
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I
am an
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ensuasistic
and energetic employee and I
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bealive
I
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absalutelly
manage the job advertised by you.
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I
would be
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gratefull
if you could consider me for this position. As I am too eager to accept to your team, I am forward to calling me the interview anytime
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convinient
to you.
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Your
faithfully
,
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Oripov
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Jakhongir
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IELTS letter Application letter for the job as an English teacher advertised in newspaper

Letter
  American English
2 paragraphs
171 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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