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You recently heard about an international company that you would like to work for.

You recently heard about an international company that you would like to work for. d5wa7
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing this letter to express my interest in working with your company. I heard lots of positive feedback about your organization from my cousin, who works in your Sydney office. I would like to propose myself as a potential candidate for any future vacancy. Currently, I am working with Reliance Communications as a regional sales manager. I have been working here for 8 years and I am a qualified post graduate in marketing. I have in depth knowledge of telecommunication industry along with pragmatic business sense. I was also awarded the best performer for the last two consecutive years. I always wanted to associate with your organization because your company gives equal chance to all the employees to prove their mettle. Moreover, your company is the pioneer in communication industry, so it will be a great opportunity for me to learn up to date skills. I look forward to hearing from you at your earliest convenience. Yours faithfully, Dildora Jurayeva
Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing this letter to express my interest in working with your
company
. I heard lots of
positive
feedback about your organization from my cousin, who works in your Sydney office.
I
would like to propose myself as a potential candidate for any future vacancy.

Currently
, I am working with Reliance Communications as a regional sales manager. I have been working here for 8
years and
I am a qualified post graduate in marketing. I have in depth knowledge of telecommunication industry along with pragmatic business sense.
I
was
also
awarded the best performer for the last two consecutive years.

I
always wanted to associate with your organization
because
your
company
gives equal chance to all the employees to prove their mettle.
Moreover
, your
company
is the pioneer in communication industry,
so
it will be a great opportunity for me to learn up to date
skills
. I look forward to hearing from you at your earliest convenience.

Yours
faithfully
,

Dildora
Jurayeva
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IELTS letter You recently heard about an international company that you would like to work for.

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
165 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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