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letter to the railway company.

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Dear Sir Micheal Hope you are doing well and stay safe, Thank you for taking the time to read my letter regards the item I recently lost on my trip. Its small bag with all stickers arround, it looks pretty old due to all the marks and logos, but it is acctually brand new one. The original colour is grey on the top and brown at the bottom without any brand name on the bag. During my trip from Union to London Station we stopped lay over for 20 minute at St Clair Station, I left the train to grab a bottel of water, but I missed my train when I came back. I left it inside the train seat number C-121. The bag is not important as much as the stuff inside it, so please help me find it. Please call the station manager for investigation, and call the train number B121-0321. The train left the station at 12: 45 pm heading straight to London station without stop. if you find it please contact me at 123-4539899 any time, any days. Thank you for your kind assistance. Best Regards Paul,
Dear Sir Micheal

Hope you are doing well and stay safe,

Thank you for taking the time to read my letter regards the item I recently lost on my trip. Its
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bag with all stickers
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arround
, it looks pretty
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due to all the marks and logos,
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it is
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acctually
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brand new
one. The original
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is
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grey
on the top and brown at the bottom without any brand name on the bag.

During my trip from Union to London
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we
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stopped
lay over for 20 minute at St Clair
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, I
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left
the
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to grab a
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bottel
of water,
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I missed my
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when I came back. I
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it inside the
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seat number C-121. The bag is not
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important
as much as the stuff inside it,
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please
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help
me find it.
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call the
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station
manager for investigation, and call the
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train
number B121-0321. The
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train
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left
the
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station
at 12: 45 pm heading straight to London
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without
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stop
.
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if
you find it
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please
contact me at 123-4539899 any time, any days. Thank you for your kind assistance.

Best Regards

Paul,

IELTS letter letter to the railway company.

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
191 words
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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