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You are being tormented by your neighbour’s food cooking on the barbecue. The smoke directly blows into your home. You shared your concerns with the neighbour, but he did not care to resolve this issue. Write a letter to the police Department and explain your problem. In your letter Introduce yourself Explain the situation Say what action you would like to the department to take

You are being tormented by your neighbour’s food cooking on the barbecue. The smoke directly blows into your home. You shared your concerns with the neighbour, but he did not care to resolve this issue. Write a letter to the police Department and explain your problem. In your letter Introduce yourself Explain the situation Say what action you would like to the department to take p50k2
Dear chief of Police, I am Greene Rile, living at 46, bliss road. I write this letter to you to draw your attention on my suffering by smoke of barbecue coming from the next door. My next door neighbour, Michel is used to cook barbecue thrice a week. Every time the smoke and smell come into my house, earlier I tried to ignore it as everyone is allowed to do anything in his property. Although with the time situation has worsened, I am a vegan and this meaty odour irritates me. When I visited his house, I came to know that his oven is very close to my bedroom window. I explained him my issue and requested him to just change the place of cooking. He agreed to keep up, however, it has been a month and he is recommenced with his habit. His stubborn nature made to me writes you. I would request you to take necessary actions again this nuisance. Please give him a notice to stop producing smoke. I solicit your support, hoping to get solution soon. Sincerely yours, Greene Rile
Dear chief of Police,

I am Greene Rile, living at 46, bliss road. I write this letter to you to draw your attention on my suffering by smoke of barbecue coming from the
next
door.

My
next
door
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neighbour
, Michel is
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used
to cook barbecue thrice a week. Every time the smoke and smell
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come
into my
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
house
, earlier I tried to
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ignore
it as everyone is
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allowed
to do anything in his property. Although with the time situation has worsened, I am a vegan and this meaty
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odour
irritates me. When I visited his
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
house
, I came to know that his oven is
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
close to my bedroom window. I
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explained
him my issue and requested him to
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just
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change
the place of cooking. He
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agreed
to
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keep
up,
however
, it has been a
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
month and
he
is recommenced
with his habit. His stubborn nature made to me writes you.

I would request you to take necessary actions again this nuisance.
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Please
give him a notice to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
stop
producing smoke.

I solicit your support, hoping to
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get
solution
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soon
.

Sincerely
yours,

Greene Rile
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IELTS letter You are being tormented by your neighbour’s food cooking on the barbecue. The smoke directly blows into your home. You shared your concerns with the neighbour, but he did not care to resolve this issue. Write a letter to the police Department and explain your problem. In your letter Introduce yourself Explain the situation Say what action you would like to the department to take

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