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Communicating with other people in person, face to face is better than communicating with them by telephone, by letter or by email. Do you agree or disagree?

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The importance of communication which was always debatable has now become more controversial with many people claiming that it is beneficial while others reject this notion. The substantial influence of this trend has sparked the controversy over the potential impact in recent years. In my opinion, the digital communication appears to be more rational. This essay will further elaborate my views for favouring the positive impact of this trend and thus will lead to a logical conclusion. Analysing the statement and explaining further, the first and foremost reason behind this is that digital communication like cell phones and emails top priorities because distance is more, life is busy and routine is hectic, practically it is not possible to meet in person. Another striking feature in this regard is that as industrialisation, modernisation and global relations are multiplying rapidly, so only cell phones, face time, Skype or emails are the only solution. Probing ahead, one of the main underlying reasons stems from the fact is that face to face communication is personal touch, which is possible in small groups and occasions, so it is not completely ignored but quite restrained. Moreover, e-messaging, greetings and different online applications are making people addicted to virtual world. Apart from the reasons mentioned above, it can be clearly stated why many are in favour of this trend. To recapitulate, according to the arguments aforementioned above, one can reach to the conclusion that the benefits of digital communication are indeed too great to ignore as it has become the biggest industry of any country
The importance of
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communication
which was always debatable has

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now
become more controversial with
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many
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people
claiming that it is

beneficial while others reject this notion. The substantial influence of this

trend has sparked the controversy over the potential impact in recent years.

In my opinion, the digital
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communication
appears to be more rational. This

essay will
further
elaborate my views for
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favouring
the
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positive
impact of this

trend and
thus
will lead to a logical conclusion.

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Analysing
the statement and explaining
further
, the
first
and foremost reason

behind this is that digital
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communication
like cell phones and emails top

priorities
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because
distance is more, life is busy and routine is hectic,

practically
it is not possible to
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meet
in person. Another striking feature in

this regard is that as
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industrialisation
,
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modernisation
and global relations

are multiplying
rapidly
,
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so
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only
cell phones, face time, Skype or emails

are the
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only
solution.

Probing ahead, one of the main underlying reasons stems from the fact is that

face to face
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communication
is personal touch, which is possible in
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small


groups and occasions,
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so
it is not completely
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ignored
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but
quite

restrained.
Moreover
, e-messaging, greetings and
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different
online

applications are making
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people
addicted to virtual world. Apart from the

reasons mentioned above, it can be
clearly
stated why
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many
are in
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favour
of

this trend.

To recapitulate, according to the arguments aforementioned above, one can

reach to the conclusion that the benefits of digital
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communication
are

indeed
too great to
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ignore
as it has become the biggest industry of any

country

IELTS letter Communicating with other people in person, face to face is better than communicating with them by telephone, by letter or by email.

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  American English
6 paragraphs
257 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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