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Write a letter to your friend that you have moved to New house.

Write a letter to your friend that you have moved to New house. Ol80y

Dear Smith, I hope you are radiant in health. I am doing well. I want to share a good news with you that I have bought my apartment last week at a Hill Road. As, you know I wish to purchase my own accommodation long time. It's most desirable for me Now, I have it. Last Sunday, I have moved to my new residence. This is near to my job location so the fact, I can save my commuting time as well as money. Although my newely penthouse is not so big yet it's designed with advanced technology. Moreover the kitchen and bathroom is constructed in modern style. Furthermore, there are two bedroom with lobby area. In addition, the tiny kitchen garden looks amazing. Here, I invite you to please come and visit my apartment. Because we met a long consequently, now We will have great time. I hope next weekend you plan and come with you family at my place. I look forward to seeing you. Yours lovingly, Johnson.

Dear Smith, I hope you are radiant in health. I am doing well. I want to share a This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 news with you that I have This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchased
bought
 my apartment last week at a Hill Road. “As” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
As
, you know I wish to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
purchase
 my This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :possess
own
 accommodation long time. It's most desirable for me This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
Now
, I have it. Last Sunday, I have This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :relocated
moved
 to my new residence. This is near to my job location This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 the fact, I can save my commuting time as well
 as money. Although my Possible spelling mistake found.newlynewelnewelsnewel yNewell
newely
 penthouse is not This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:hugeenormousgiganticvast
big
yet
 it's designed with advanced technology. Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?Moreover,
Moreover
 the kitchen and bathroom is constructed
 in modern style. Furthermore
, there are two Possible agreement error. Did you mean "bedrooms"?bedrooms
bedroom
 with lobby area. In addition
, the tiny kitchen garden looks amazing. Here, I invite you to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :satisfy
please
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approacharrive
come
 and visit my apartment. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
Because
 we met a long consequently
, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
 We will have great time. I hope next
 weekend you plan and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approacharrive
come
 with you family at my place. I look forward to seeing you. Yours lovingly
, Johnson. 