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Last month you had holiday where you stayed with friends. They have just sent you some photo of your holiday.You should say in your later.Thank for styed with you.Apologize for not writer earlier. Invite your country.

Last month you had holiday where you stayed with friends. They have just sent you some photo of your holiday. You should say in your later. Thank for styed with you. Apologize for not writer earlier. Invite your country. W8oGk
Dear Jaman. Hope this letter finds you in radiant of health and best of spirits. I am writing this letter to thank all of you for gave me quality time whole the holiday. Actually, when I was holiday in the UK last month, I spent great time in my life, it is never possible if you and kamal did not stated with me. So, I would like to thank you from my heart for arranging such wonderful holiday and also sent all memorable pictures. When i came back at home, I had to do a lot of work that is why i did not able to write letter to you. I apolozise for that. You heard to know that I am planning to next holiday that you and kamal must come in my country. You always wanted to see and know about Bangladeshi culture, I think it would be better chance to you. In my country, there are many tourist sports, parks, museum, beaches you can enjoy whole the time. I formally invite you and others friends. Let me know about your opinion via call or email, if you come I would be grateful. Hope see you soon! Your lovingly Raj
Dear
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Jaman
.

Hope this letter finds you in radiant of health and best of spirits. I am writing this letter to thank all of you for gave me quality time whole the holiday.

Actually, when I was holiday in the UK last month, I spent great time in my life, it is never possible if you and
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kamal
did not
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stated
with me.
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So
, I would like to thank you from my heart for arranging such wonderful holiday and
also
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sent
all memorable pictures.

When
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i
came back at home, I had to do
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a lot of
work
that is
why
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i
did not able to write letter to you. I
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apolozise
for that.

You heard to know that I am planning to
next
holiday that you and
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kamal
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must
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come
in my country. You always wanted to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
see
and know about Bangladeshi culture, I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
think
it would be better chance to you. In my country, there are
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
tourist sports, parks, museum, beaches you can enjoy whole the time. I
formally
invite you
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and others
friends.
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Let
me know about your opinion via call or email, if you
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
come
I would be grateful.

Hope
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see
you
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soon
!

Your
lovingly


Raj
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IELTS letter Last month you had holiday where you stayed with friends. They have just sent you some photo of your holiday. You should say in your later. Thank for styed with you. Apologize for not writer earlier. Invite your country.

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  American English
8 paragraphs
200 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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