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A local internet service is launching a 5 G technology in your area. Write to the manager about the initiative.

A local internet service is launching a 5 G technology in your area. Write to the manager about the initiative. Q57RL
Dear Manager, It is extremely welcoming of your company’s initiative to establish 5 G internet service in my Ernakulam city which is a bit tucked away from the main street Kolenchery town. Firstly, high speed internet service will definitely benefit the working class professionals who are forced to work from home due to covid-19 situation. For getting things done at the office, it has become essential to engage in day to day meetings either through zoom or microsoft teams which would consume a lot of data. This inverbily demands the requirement for a stable and swift internet connectivity. Secondly, since almost all schools and colleges are under lockdown conditions, students are studying by online classes for which the internet is a must! If the internet speed is low, videos might start to buffer, thereby these students wouldnt be able to attend class properly. Above all, classes can even extend from morning till evening so a steady is a mandatory for this case. Overall, I strongly believe that a good internet will be helpful for all the citizens living in my city. Warm regards,
Dear Manager,

It is
extremely
welcoming of your
company
’s initiative to establish 5 G internet service in my
Ernakulam
city which is a bit tucked away from the main street
Kolenchery
town.

Firstly
, high speed internet service will definitely benefit the working
class
professionals who
are forced
to work from home due to
covid-19
situation. For getting things done at the office, it has become essential to engage in day to day meetings either through zoom or
microsoft
teams which would consume
a lot of
data. This
inverbily
demands the requirement for a stable and swift internet connectivity.

Secondly
, since almost all schools and colleges are under lockdown conditions, students are studying by online
classes
for which the internet is a
must
! If the internet speed is low, videos might
start
to buffer, thereby these students
wouldnt
be able to attend
class
properly
.
Above all
,
classes
can even extend from morning till evening
so
a steady is a mandatory for this case.

Overall
, I
strongly
believe that a
good
internet will be helpful for all the citizens living in my city.

Warm regards,
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IELTS letter A local internet service is launching a 5 G technology in your area. Write to the manager about the initiative.

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