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Write a letter to your neighbor because you have some problems about his car park. In your letter Welcome him/her as a neighbor Explain your problem Give some suggestion

Write a letter to your neighbor because you have some problems about his car park. In your letter Welcome him/her as a neighbor Explain your problem Give some suggestion wePLn
Dear Mr. Samar I Hope you are doing well with your family. I am writing this letter to inform you about your car park which you kept in my parking zone. I am Pankaj Mahajan and I am live in Flat No 11 in first floor with my family. We have been living here since 8 years. It would be great if you visit my home with your family in the weekend. I have been seen that last few days you are keeping your vehicle in my place. Several times I tried to contact with you however I couldn’t. As a result, I cannot utilize my parking space and I was parking my own vehicle on road which is not safe. It would be better if you arrange some other parking place as discussed with your house owner. Otherwise you can park your vehicle on the opposite our building parking zone and I heard that there are plenty of parking spaces are vacant recently. I hope you don’t mind and take this issue friendly. Yours ever Pankaj
Dear Mr. Samar

I Hope you are doing well with your family. I am writing this letter to inform you about your car park which you
kept
in my
parking
zone.

I
am Pankaj
Mahajan and
I am
live
in Flat No 11 in
first
floor with my family. We have been living here
since
8 years. It would be great if you visit my home with your family in the weekend.

I have been
seen
that last few days you are keeping your vehicle in my place. Several times I tried to contact with you
however
I couldn’t.
As a result
, I cannot utilize my
parking
space and I was
parking
my
own
vehicle on road which is not safe.

It would be better if you arrange
some
other
parking
place as discussed with your
house
owner.
Otherwise
you can park your vehicle on the opposite our building
parking
zone and I heard that there are
plenty
of
parking
spaces are vacant recently.

I hope you don’t mind and take this issue friendly.

Yours ever

Pankaj
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IELTS letter Write a letter to your neighbor because you have some problems about his car park. In your letter Welcome him/her as a neighbor Explain your problem Give some suggestion

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
176 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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