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Write a letter to your neighbor because you have some problems about his car park. In your letter Welcome him/her as a neighbor Explain your problem Give some suggestion

Write a letter to your neighbor because you have some problems about his car park. In your letter Welcome him/her as a neighbor Explain your problem Give some suggestion wePLn
Dear Mr. Samar I Hope you are doing well with your family. I am writing this letter to inform you about your car park which you kept in my parking zone. I am Pankaj Mahajan and I am live in Flat No 11 in first floor with my family. We have been living here since 8 years. It would be great if you visit my home with your family in the weekend. I have been seen that last few days you are keeping your vehicle in my place. Several times I tried to contact with you however I couldn’t. As a result, I cannot utilize my parking space and I was parking my own vehicle on road which is not safe. It would be better if you arrange some other parking place as discussed with your house owner. Otherwise you can park your vehicle on the opposite our building parking zone and I heard that there are plenty of parking spaces are vacant recently. I hope you don’t mind and take this issue friendly. Yours ever Pankaj
Dear Mr. Samar

I Hope you are doing well with your family. I am writing this letter to inform you about your car park which you
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
kept
in my
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
parking
zone.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
am Pankaj
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
Mahajan and
I am
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
live
in Flat No 11 in
first
floor with my family. We have been living here
Did you mean "for"? ('since' refers to a point in time, whereas 'for' refers to a period)
since
8 years. It would be great if you visit my home with your family in the weekend.

I have been
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
seen
that last few days you are keeping your vehicle in my place. Several times I tried to contact with you
however
I couldn’t.
As a result
, I cannot utilize my
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
parking
space and I was
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
parking
my
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
own
vehicle on road which is not safe.

It would be better if you arrange
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
other
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
parking
place as discussed with your
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
house
owner.
Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Otherwise
you can park your vehicle on the opposite our building
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
parking
zone and I heard that there are
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
plenty
of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
parking
spaces are vacant recently.

I hope you don’t mind and take this issue friendly.

Yours ever

Pankaj

IELTS letter Write a letter to your neighbor because you have some problems about his car park. In your letter Welcome him/her as a neighbor Explain your problem Give some suggestion

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
176 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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