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Laura and husband will be traveled for 2 days because of the winning tickets. Therefore, she would like her father in-law to look after the plants. But, since he was very busy, he couldn’t remember to water the plants. Consequently, when they went back home, all the plants were in bad situation.

Laura and husband will be traveled for 2 days because of the winning tickets. Therefore, she would like her father in-law to look after the plants. But, since he was very busy, he couldn’t remember to water the plants. Consequently, when they went back home, all the plants were in bad situation. YyPpr
Dear Madam, I am writing to express my perspective about your decision of cancelling this party. Above all, I am extremely disappointed about the international food party will be canceled. That thing might decrease your reputation in the other’s eyes especially with all the members of this club. Furthermore, I seem to lose my entire belief in your club due to the fact you can not even refund our money. I truly suggest some solutions to resolve your problems. You should give money back for people who purchased the tickets. In addition, you also have a commitment to organizing the other party at a particular time as in the near future as possible. That would be an effective way to solve your puzzle. I am looking forward to hearing your response.
Dear Madam,

I am writing to express my perspective about your decision of cancelling this party.

Above all
, I am
extremely
disappointed about the international food party will
be canceled
. That thing might decrease your reputation in the other’s eyes
especially
with all the members of this club.

Furthermore
, I seem to lose my entire belief in your club due to the fact you can not even refund our money.

I
truly
suggest
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some
solutions to resolve your problems. You should give money back for
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people
who
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
purchased
the tickets.
In addition
, you
also
have a commitment to organizing the other party at a particular time as in the near future as possible. That would be an effective way to solve your puzzle.

I am looking forward to hearing your response.
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IELTS letter Laura and husband will be traveled for 2 days because of the winning tickets. Therefore, she would like her father in-law to look after the plants. But, since he was very busy, he couldn’t remember to water the plants. Consequently, when they went back home, all the plants were in bad situation.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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