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Write a letter to your friend that you are arranging a picnic

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Dear Sally, What’s up Man! Remember It is time for our annual trip this year which we had planned long time back and I wanted to inform you guys on the plans, arrangements that I have already made for the same This year since it is my turn to plan our one day tour, I have picked up our all-time favorite spot Lulu Mall, Marine Drive and Fort Kochi Beach this time. So, I have already made some arrangements for our tour. I have reserved movie tickets at Lulu Mall, I have booked slots for Boating at Marine Drive. Additionally, I have arranged a DJ party during boating and guess who is our MC. It is none other than your favourite Mr. Govind Padmasoorya. Yay! ! . Now I need a bit of extra help from you. I want you book a Uber to pick us up from our homes till Marine drive. Also please bring along with you, your Mother’s special mouthwatering, scrumptious chocolate chip cookies as well as some beverages. Pooja will be arranging our return trip back to our homes after our trip. Now we have the Plan of action. So, see you guys soon this Saturday. Best Regards, Nadine
Dear Sally,

What’s up
Man
! Remember It is time for our annual trip this year which we had planned long time back and I wanted to inform you guys on the plans, arrangements that I have already made for the same

This year since it is my turn to plan our
one day
tour, I have picked up our all-time favorite spot Lulu Mall, Marine Drive and Fort
Kochi
Beach this time.

So
, I have already made
some
arrangements for our tour. I have reserved movie tickets at Lulu Mall, I have booked slots for Boating at Marine Drive.
Additionally
, I have arranged a DJ party during boating and guess who is our MC. It is none other than your
favourite
Mr.
Govind
Padmasoorya
. Yay! !
.


Now
I need a bit of extra
help
from you. I want you book
a
Uber to pick us up from our homes till Marine drive.
Also
please
bring along with you, your Mother’s special mouthwatering, scrumptious chocolate chip cookies
as well
as
some
beverages.
Pooja
will be arranging our return trip back to our homes after our trip.

Now
we have the Plan of action.
So
,
see
you guys
soon
this Saturday.

Best Regards,

Nadine
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IELTS letter Write a letter to your friend that you are arranging a picnic

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  American English
7 paragraphs
202 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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