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In a letter og apology clearly state the problem and offer your apology right in the beginning of the letter give some explanation for what happened clearly state what actions you are talking to solve problem or improve the situation

In a letter og apology clearly state the problem and offer your apology right in the beginning of the letter give some explanation for what happened clearly state what actions you are talking to solve problem or improve the situation 8Ql5l

Dear JohnPlease accept my sincery apology for my behavior on the meeting last week. I realised how you felt that time. I should not be rude for just not so important matter. Let me explain you about my students' feelings and my deep concern related to English party which we organised. We had been preparing for this party with my students for a month. During that period we did not notice any disorder with party hall equipments. We had planned to perform several plays on the stage. Unfortunately, unexpected incident occured with equipments on the day we had a party. You might imagine the fallen spirits of my students in front of spectators. In this situation most of us blamed you. In addition, you were criticized by myself unprofessionally. As time went by I could understand my disrespct approach and discrimination. It might be difficult for you to accept my apology but hope that my true words will help me and give me another chance to keep our friendship. SincerelyNancy

Dear Possible spelling mistake found.
JohnPlease
 accept my Possible spelling mistake found.sincere
sincery
 apology for my behavior on the meeting ‘last week’ indicates a finished event of the past. Please check the predicate's tense.
last week
. I Possible spelling mistake. 'realised' is British English.realized
realised
 how you felt that time. I should not be rude for This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
 not This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:vitalcriticalessential
important
 matter. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorize
Let
 me This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :interpret
explain
 you about my students' feelings and my deep concern related to English You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdinnercelebration
party
 which we Possible spelling mistake. 'organised' is British English.organized
organised
. We had been preparing for this You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdinnercelebration
party
 with my students for a month. During that period we did not notice any disorder with You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdinnercelebration
party
 hall equipments. We had planned to perform several plays on the stage. Unfortunately, unexpected incident Possible spelling mistake. Did you mean "occurred", the past tense form of the verb 'occur'?occurred
occured
 with equipments on the day we had a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdinnercelebration
party
. You might imagine the fallen spirits of my students in front of spectators. In this situation most of us blamed you. In addition
, you were criticized
 by myself unprofessionally
. As time went by I could understand my Possible spelling mistake found.disrespect
disrespct
 approach and discrimination. It might be difficult for you to accept my apology This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 hope that my true words will This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 me and give me another chance to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :retain
keep
 our friendship. Possible spelling mistake found.Sincerely Nancy
SincerelyNancy