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Asking advice from the friend for the course selection,

Asking advice from the friend for the course selection, Epye3
Dear Amin, You are seeking advice regarding the course selection, I am writing this letter for giving you the information about the course selection. First of all, the course I selected was for English, the university has offered us the courses in two batches, either you can do a course in the evening or morning section. The best teachers are teaching this course. They recommended the books of different publishers. we had enough practise for the exams.
Dear
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Amin
, You are seeking advice regarding the
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course
selection, I am writing this letter for giving you the information about the
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course
selection.
This phrase is redundant. Consider using "first".
First of all
, the
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course
I selected was for English, the university has offered us the
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courses
in two batches, either you can do a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
course
in the evening or morning section. The best teachers are teaching this
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
course
. They recommended the books of
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different
publishers.
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we
had
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enough
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practise
for the exams.
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IELTS letter Asking advice from the friend for the course selection,

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
77 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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