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The bright side of new normal

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Dien Bien, June, 22th, 2021 Dear our heroes, I am writing to inquire about the health of the heroes in white coat and express my feelings and gratitude for their contributions to people's health during the Covid-19 pandemic. This is my first time writing to doctors so there may be some moving feelings that I would like to express through this letter. Anyway, I am very happy that one day I have the opportunity to express all my feelings when I have to witness the outbreak of a pandemic in my country. Although the pandemic in my city is not as complicated as other cities, I can understand the dedication that doctors have made for us through media and social networks. Every day when I read newspapers or watch news about pandemic areas, the thing that I pay most attention to is always the tired faces but always full of optimism and hope on the faces of the doctors. I can feel the heat when the angels in white have to wear thick and uncomfortable protective suits, and also the fatigue from lack of sleep, missing their families and their anxiety. I know a friend whose brother is a doctor at the center of the pandemic, and my friend shared the true feelings of a frontline doctor and his family. My friend wants everyone to understand that doctors are only human and they also sometimes feel scared and helpless in the face of a complicated pandemic. His family is very worried every day for the doctors and especially their son, they just hope that he will save a lot of people and return safely. Every time he calls home, he comforts his parents and sister to take good care of their health and not to worry about him. Although he is very tired, he does not say it, but he silently tries to cure the patients because he can understand that everyone is trying their best to win the pandemic. To end this letter, I would like to send to the doctors who are fighting the epidemic that: "We are family, you protect us, we protect you". Even if we are facing a major global pandemic, as long as our country unites, the peaceful and safe atmosphere of the past will return soon. I hope that all our heroes will stay healthy and full of hope to always be a pillar of our country, we include students, teachers, engineers, chefs. . . will always be a solid fulcrum for doctors. Yours sincerely, Kieu Anh Aa
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, June,
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22th
, 2021

Dear our heroes,

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doctors
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happy that one day I have the opportunity to express all my
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when I
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witness the outbreak of a pandemic in my country.

Although the pandemic in my city is not as complicated as other cities, I can understand the dedication that
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doctors
have made for us through media and social networks. Every day when I read newspapers or
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watch
news about pandemic areas, the thing that I pay most attention to is always the tired faces
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but
always full of optimism and
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hope
on the faces of the
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doctors
. I can feel the heat when the angels in white
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have to
wear thick and uncomfortable protective suits, and
also
the fatigue from lack of sleep, missing their
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families
and their anxiety.

I know a friend whose brother is a
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doctor
at the center of the pandemic, and my friend shared the true
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feelings
of a
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frontline
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and his
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. My friend wants everyone to understand that
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are
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human and
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feel scared and helpless in the face of a complicated pandemic. His
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worried every day for the
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doctors
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that he will save
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people
and return
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good
care of their health and not to worry about him. Although he is
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tired, he does not say it,
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he can understand that everyone is trying their best to win the pandemic.

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who are fighting the epidemic that:
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We are
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, you protect us, we protect you
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. Even if we are facing a major global pandemic, as long as our country unites, the peaceful and safe atmosphere of the past will return
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. I
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that all our heroes will stay healthy and full of
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to always be a pillar of our country, we include students, teachers, engineers, chefs.
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will
always be a solid fulcrum for doctors.

Yours
sincerely
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