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You have recently moved, write to your English speaking friend, in your letter

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Dear John, How are you doing? Long time no see! I can’t wait to tell you that I’ve recently moved to a cosy apartment in the city centre. As you may know, I got a promotion to be the Product Manager in the headquarter in the city centre 3 months ago. Since I was living in the outskirts of the city, it’d be approximately 1-hour commuting. So, the best solution was to relocate. My new house is more spacious that’s why it costs me a fortune, but I’m so impressed by its design and location too. It’s near my office by 10 minutes so it’s time-saving. For the design, it consists of 3 bedrooms, one of them has an attached bathroom, a well-equipped kitchen, a living room, a dinning one with a garden view and another bathroom. Finally, when will you come around? I hope you’d be available next weekend. It’s my birthday party and I’m thinking of having an outdoor gathering in the garden. My dining room will also be prepared just in case it rains. You’re more than welcome to join as I assure you an unforgettable night. See you soon. Yours, Peter
Dear John,

How are you doing? Long time no
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see
! I can’t wait to
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tell
you that I’ve recently
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moved
to a
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cosy
apartment in the city
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centre
.

As you may know, I
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got
a promotion to be the Product Manager in the
The word 'headquarter' is a verb. The noun to describe a corporate head office ends with an 's'.
headquarter
in the city
Possible spelling mistake. 'centre' is British English.
centre
3 months ago. Since I was living in the outskirts of the city, it’d be approximately 1-hour commuting.
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So
, the best solution was to relocate.

My new
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house
is more spacious that’s why it costs me a fortune,
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but
I’m
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so
impressed by its design and location too. It’s near my office by 10 minutes
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
it’s time-saving. For the design, it consists of 3 bedrooms, one of them has an attached bathroom, a well-equipped kitchen, a living room, a dinning one with a garden view and another bathroom.

Finally
, when will you
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
come
around? I hope you’d be available
next
weekend. It’s my birthday party and I’m thinking of having an outdoor gathering in the garden. My dining room will
also
be prepared
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just
in case it rains. You’re more than welcome to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
join
as I assure you an unforgettable night.

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See
you
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soon
.

Yours,

Peter
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IELTS letter You have recently moved, write to your English speaking friend, in your letter

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8 paragraphs
194 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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  • Check your writing for errors
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