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Write a letter to your friend inviting to him/her attend the party. Explain why you are invite him/her.

Write a letter to your friend inviting to him/her attend the party. Explain why you are invite him/her. XVqEY
Dear my friend Anita. How are you. I didn't write long time. Sorry. I planned my birthday's party. And I want my friends participate in my happy day. Our clssmates didn't meet so long time. Iam writing this letter to personally invite you and your family on my birthday's party. Iam eager to meet with my classmates and we remember in our childhood ages. Additionary my close friends and of course you will come to my home. If you visit my home when You will introduce with my family. Sorry I forgot to give you some information about my family. I have got two doughters and a son. I hope you will come and you will see and great yourself with my family. The party will be in my new address. It will be held on 12th september 2021 at my residence. The program will begin at 7 p. m and dinner will start at 8 p. m onwards. My address in Green hard street home number 45. Please confirm your availability on or before at 5 p. m by contacting me at 222567843. I hope you will be able to come on time. See yuo soon. Laura Smith.
Dear my friend Anita. How are you. I didn't write long time. Sorry. I planned my birthday's party. And I want my friends participate in my happy day. Our
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clssmates
didn't
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meet
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so
long time.
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Iam
writing this letter to
personally
invite you and your
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family
on my birthday's party.
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Iam
eager to
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meet
with my
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classmates and
we remember in our childhood ages.
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Additionary
my close friends and
of course
you will
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come
to my home. If you visit my home when You will introduce with my
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family
. Sorry I forgot to give you
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some
information about my
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family
. I have
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got
two
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doughters
and a son. I hope you will
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come
and you will
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see
and great yourself with my
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family
. The party will be in my new address. It will
be held
on 12th
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september
2021 at my residence. The program will
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begin
at 7 p. m and dinner will
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start
at 8 p. m onwards. My address in Green
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hard
street home number 45.
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Please
confirm your availability on or
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before
at 5 p. m by contacting me at 222567843. I hope you will be able to
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come
on time.
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See
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yuo
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soon
. Laura Smith.
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IELTS letter Write a letter to your friend inviting to him/her attend the party. Explain why you are invite him/her.

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  American English
1 paragraphs
199 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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