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You work as a part-time employee in a company. The company has recently posted an advertisement seeking a person for a full-time position. You want to apply for this full-time job. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter, introduce yourself and explain why you are writing express your interest in having this full-time job explain why you think you are a suitable candidate for the post

Dear Sir, Greetings of the day! I am Rajwinder Kaur, employment Id is R455, working part-time as the web designer in techno-view company from last 2 years. Yesterday, while reading e-newspaper, I saw an advertisement that the company was searching for a candidate for regular occupation for the same profile that I have. My main purpose of writing this letter is that I am keen to apply for the permanent employment as I recently completed my studies and now, I can legally do full-time work. Moreover, I consider myself as a suitable person for this position because I did Master of Technology in the same field. Furthermore, being the past employee of this organization, I am much familiar with work responsibilities and I can handle workload more effectively because I don't need any kind of extra training and it will be win-win situation for both me and company. I hope you will think about my interest towards this position and will respond me as soon as possible. yours Sincerely, Rajwinder Kaur
Dear Sir,

Greetings of the day! I am
Rajwinder
Kaur
, employment
Id
is R455, working part-time as the web designer in techno-view
company
from last 2 years. Yesterday, while reading e-newspaper, I
saw
an advertisement that the
company
was searching for a candidate for regular occupation for the same profile that I have. My main purpose of writing this letter is that I am keen to apply for the permanent employment as I recently completed my studies and
now
, I can
legally
do full-time work.
Moreover
, I consider myself as a suitable person for this position
because
I did Master of Technology in the same field.
Furthermore
, being the past employee of this organization, I am much familiar with work responsibilities and I can handle workload more
effectively
because
I don't need any kind of extra
training and
it will be win-win situation for both me and
company
.

I hope you will
think
about my interest towards this position and will respond me as
soon
as possible.

yours
Sincerely
,

Rajwinder
Kaur
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IELTS letter You work as a part-time employee in a company. The company has recently posted an advertisement seeking a person for a full-time position. You want to apply for this full-time job. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter, introduce yourself and explain why you are writing express your interest in having this full-time job explain why you think you are a suitable candidate for the post

Letter
  American English
5 paragraphs
170 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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