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Complain about computer product

Complain about computer product 6llpr
Dear Madam, I am writing this letter to complain about your product which I had bought computer model Lenovo yesterday. Unfortunately, the computer turned out to be defective. I had angryed all day last day. I lived near your company office. So I bought computer your shop. However your product is not quality as you said. It has not key board's cable. Addition to this is computer very uncomfortable because it turns on slowly. As a result, it takes me an hour. To solve such kind problems, I think you will have your product exchange. Otherwise, you will return my money to me. I would be very grateful if you take into considiration my suggestion. I am looking forward to hearing from you at your earliest convenience. Yours faithfully James Bond.
Dear Madam,

I am writing this letter to complain about your product which I had
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bought
computer model Lenovo yesterday. Unfortunately, the computer turned out to be defective. I had
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angryed
all day last day.

I
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lived
near your
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company
office.
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So
I
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bought
computer your shop.
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However
your product is not quality as you said. It has not key board's cable. Addition to this is computer
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very
uncomfortable
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because
it turns on
slowly
.
As a result
, it takes me an hour. To solve such kind problems, I
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think
you will have your product exchange.
Otherwise
, you will return my money to me.

I would be
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very
grateful if you take into
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considiration
my suggestion.

I am looking forward to hearing from you at your earliest convenience.

Yours
faithfully
James Bond.
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IELTS letter Complain about computer product

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
131 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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