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Write a letter to your friend in another country where you like to visit for the holidays. In your letter, you should: explain your travel plans describe the interesting places you plan to visit ask for suggestions for sightseeing options.

Write a letter to your friend in another country where you like to visit for the holidays. In your letter, you should: explain your travel plans describe the interesting places you plan to visit ask for suggestions for sightseeing options. lyQb
Hi Dev, Hope you are doing well! I am planning to visit Australia this summer for the holidays with my boyfriend. It would be great to catch up with you and your girlfriend while we are in Sydney. I was also hoping to get some suggestions on my travel itinerary from you. So far, we have decided to stay in Sydney for 3 days and visit the Opera House and the Manly island. We also plan to visit the local markets, the harbour bridge and experience the local culture. My boyfriend and I love water sports and would love to keep one day aside for them. Can you suggest some hotspots in Sydney where we could experience water sports like jet ski or paragliding? Also, it would be great if you could tell me some offbeat places in Sydney which are not visited by too many tourists. I look forward to hear back from you! Take Care. Eesha
Hi Dev, Hope you are doing well! I am planning to visit Australia this summer for the holidays with my boyfriend. It would be great to catch up with you and your girlfriend while we are in Sydney.

I was
also
hoping to
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some
suggestions on my travel itinerary from you.
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So
far, we have decided to stay in Sydney for 3 days and visit the Opera
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House
and the
Manly
island. We
also
plan to visit the local markets, the
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harbour
bridge and experience the local culture.

My boyfriend and I
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love
water sports and would
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love
to
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keep
one day aside for them. Can you suggest
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some
hotspots in Sydney where we could experience water sports like jet ski or paragliding?
Also
, it would be great if you could
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tell
me
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some
offbeat places in Sydney which are not visited by too
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many
tourists.

I look forward
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to hear
back from you!

Take Care.

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Eesha

IELTS letter Write a letter to your friend in another country where you like to visit for the holidays. In your letter, you should: explain your travel plans describe the interesting places you plan to visit ask for suggestions for sightseeing options.

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
157 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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