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Write a letter to your friend in another country where you like to visit for the holidays. In your letter, you should: • explain your travel plans • describe the interesting places you plan to visit • ask for suggestions for sightseeing options.

Write a letter to your friend in another country where you like to visit for the holidays. In your letter, you should: • explain your travel plans • describe the interesting places you plan to visit • ask for suggestions for sightseeing options. Xe0N
Dear John, I hope this letter finds you very well. I am pleased to inform you that I am planning to visit your country in the summers probably in the month of mid May. I will be travelling with my husband, as he has business conference meeting for two days, we thought it is a good idea, if we can explore the beautiful canada after his office hours. We are planning to stay there for 15 days. I am fascinated by pictures of CN Tower, aquarium, beautiful beaches of Canada which I am keen to look with my own eyes. Is there any other interesting place and or any other events happening over the period we will be staying? We would be interested in most of anything, so if you know of upccoming occasions. we’d love to know so we can plan accordingly. Hope to see you soon, Navneet
Dear John,

I hope this letter finds you
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very
well. I am
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pleased
to inform you that I am planning to visit your country in the summers
probably
in the month of mid May.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
will be travelling with my husband, as he has business conference meeting for two days, we
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thought
it is a
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good
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idea
, if we can explore the
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beautiful
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canada
after his office hours. We are planning to stay there for 15 days. I
am fascinated
by pictures of CN Tower, aquarium,
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beautiful
beaches of Canada which I am keen to look with my
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own
eyes.

Is there any other interesting place and or any other
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
events
happening over the period we will be staying? We would
be interested
in
Consider using "most anything" or "most of the anything".
most of anything
,
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so
if you know of
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upccoming
occasions.
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we
’d
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love
to know
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so
we can plan
accordingly
.

Hope to
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see
you
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soon
,

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Navneet
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IELTS letter Write a letter to your friend in another country where you like to visit for the holidays. In your letter, you should: • explain your travel plans • describe the interesting places you plan to visit • ask for suggestions for sightseeing options.

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  American English
6 paragraphs
148 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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