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Thanking friend for dinner

Thanking friend for dinner J9RD

Dear Jim, I'm writing to thank you and your family for the lovely dinner we had last week. You know I have been feeling down lately, especially for being away from my country for so long, this is why having a chance to spend the evening with your parents and siblings (and with you as well, of course) really helped me to realize how fortunate I am to be welcome to your home and to get to know your culture. It was so refreshing to hear your fathers stories, why can’t you be as funny as him? . Besides, your mother's enchillada is the most amazing thing I've tasted my whole life! Honestly, if I lived with you, I would probably be twice my size. Anyway, above all, I must say how much I loved to play Pokemon with you and your little brother. For instance, back home I used to play it all the time with my friends so I hope we can do it again sometime. Actually, I would be more than plased to have you all for dinner this Saturday. My sister will be in town, therefore we can prepare some traditional Brazilian dishes. I'm sure it'll be amazing! I hope you can make it! Warm regards!

Dear Jim,

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get
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make
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Warm regards! 