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Reference to my choice of improved benefits of ways to increase employee motivation.

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Dear Sir. I am writing in reference to my choice of improved benefits of ways to increase employee motivation. It’s totally normal for employees to face dips in motivation, but it becomes a problem when your colleagues are consistently disengaged. That is why we have to deliberate about this problem. I would like to present my choices. - Change the scenery. The environment impacts on the team work motivation. Sometimes a small shift of scenery can provide a big shift in motivation. So it is essential to spend some money to decorate the office (plants, pictures, . . )or some things are artistic. Spending even a few moments in different surroundings can provide a new perspective, and often a noticeable boost in motivation. - Training and improving skills. Organizing HR training for employees regularly is also the way to motivate employees to work effectively is to. With the skills equipped, training will help employees complete their work better while increasing the ability to attract and retain talent to stay with the business.
Dear Sir.

I am writing in reference to my choice of
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improved
benefits of ways to increase
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employee
motivation.

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totally
normal for
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employees
to face dips in motivation,
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but
it becomes a problem when your colleagues are
consistently
disengaged.
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deliberate about this problem.

I would like to present my choices.

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Change
the scenery.

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Sometimes
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small
shift of scenery can provide a
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big
shift in motivation.
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So
it is essential to spend
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some
money to decorate the office (plants, pictures
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or
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some
things are artistic. Spending even a few moments in
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different
surroundings can provide a new perspective, and
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often
a noticeable boost in motivation.

Consider using an m-dash in dialogues and enumerations.
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Training and improving
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skills
.

Organizing HR training for
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
employees
regularly
is
also
the way to motivate
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employees
to work
effectively
is to. With the
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skills
equipped, training will
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help
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employees
complete their work better while increasing the ability to attract and retain talent to stay with the business.
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IELTS letter Reference to my choice of improved benefits of ways to increase employee motivation.

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  American English
8 paragraphs
170 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 5.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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