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This is part of a letter you received from an English speaking friend. I’m planning to visit you in September with my parents. Can you suggest some activities in your areas? What kind of clothes should I pack? Write an email to Ann. You should write at least 120 words

This is part of a letter you received from an English speaking friend. I’m planning to visit you in September with my parents. Can you suggest some activities in your areas? What kind of clothes should I pack? Write an email to Ann. KlDe3

Dear Ann, I am extremely glad to hear that you are going to set a plan to visit my family this September. As you might know, there is the Mid-Autumn Festival in this month, thus I think it will be an interesting trip for you. During the festival, a great deal of activities are held. Have you ever joined the lantern parade before? I bet you will be strikingly surprised because of its uniqueness and mild atmosphere. We, together with other children in my neighborhood, will hold lanterns, walk down the street, and then eat moon cakes that are considered an indispensable part when it comes to the Mid-Autumn. Concerning the clothes, I believe that you should prepare outfits as comforable as possible since the weather here is pretty mild and warm. Or if there is any inconvenience in your flight, you can freely purchase some clothes in my country. Do you have any more question? Feel free to ask me. I look forward to your arrival. Best wishes, Chau

Dear Ann,

I am extremely
 glad to hear that you are going to set a plan to visit my family this September.

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Do you have any more question? Feel free to ask me. I look forward to your arrival.

Best wishes,

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