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Write a letter to your friend apologizing for not informing them about a recent move you made to another city. In your letter include: an explanation for your sudden move, a description your new home, in what way your new home is better than your old home.

Write a letter to your friend apologizing for not informing them about a recent move you made to another city. In your letter include: an explanation for your sudden move, a description your new home, in what way your new home is better than your old home. BEYp
Dear Janie, Hi! I hope this letter of mine find you in pink of your life. I'm pretty good in spite of working hard. Anyway, I am writing this letter to apologizing you due to the fact that I had not informed you that I moved to Ambala last month. My company transferred me here that's why suddenly shifting have to me made without informing anybody. You would be pleased to know about my new home. I buy a house near city center which is extremely lovely place. Its a big flat with four badroom, huge parking space and a small but beautiful garden. From roof of the house you can view airport. I don't except we will going to love this place. Old one is smaller then this house and even in a crowed place. This new accommodation have up to date equipment's. Next week I am thronging a party here and you with your family is invited to come here as early as possible. I can't wait to see you. It's been aged since we've seen each another. And don't forget to give my love to all your family. With Regards, Jyoti
Dear Janie, Hi! I hope this letter of mine find you in pink of your life. I'm pretty
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good
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in spite of
working
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hard
. Anyway, I am writing this letter to apologizing you due to the fact that I had not informed you that I
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moved
to
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Ambala
last month. My
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company
transferred me here that's why
suddenly
shifting
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have to
me made without informing anybody. You would be
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pleased
to know about my new home. I
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buy
a
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house
near city center which is
extremely
lovely place.
Did you mean "it's" (="it is") instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Its
a
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big
flat with four
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badroom
, huge parking space and a
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small
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but
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beautiful
garden. From roof of the
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house
you can view airport. I don't except we will
The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: "go"
going
to
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love
this place.
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Old
one is
Did you mean "smaller than"?
smaller then
this
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house
and even in a crowed place. This new accommodation have up to date equipment's.
Next
week I am thronging a party here and you with your family
is invited
to
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come
here as early as possible. I can't wait to
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see
you. It's
been aged
since we've
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seen
each another. And don't forget to give my
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
love
to all your family. With Regards,
Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraph
Jyoti
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IELTS letter Write a letter to your friend apologizing for not informing them about a recent move you made to another city. In your letter include: an explanation for your sudden move, a description your new home, in what way your new home is better than your old home.

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  American English
1 paragraphs
193 words
5.5
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