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Your child is going on a three day school trip to another country. The head teacher wants to find parents to go with the group and you would like to go. Write a letter to the head teacher. In your letter: Say why you would like to go on the trip Suggest what you could do to help during the trip Ask other questions about the trip

Your child is going on a three day school trip to another country. The head teacher wants to find parents to go with the group and you would like to go. Write a letter to the head teacher. In your letter: Say why you would like to go on the trip Suggest what you could do to help during the trip Ask other questions about the trip 2dKk

Dear Sir/Madam, Hope you are doing well! I am writing this letter to express my interest in accompanying my son on the school trip to the USA. Apparently, I was also planning a trip to the USA. But due to hectic schedule, I couldn't get time. However, I will be available on the next month so it will be great opportunity for me to join my son on this trip. Moreover, I have visited several times in USA and I am very familiar with the cities and other locations that your school is planning to visit; therefore, I think I will be able to share a lot of useful information with the students. However, I have two questions related to the trip. Firstly, What would be the mode of transportation in USA between the cities. Secondly, are we supposed to book the hotels from ourselves or will it be done by school administration? I am looking forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully,

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, I have two questions related to the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtrekrunexpeditionoutingswingtour
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. Firstly
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 between the cities. Secondly
, are we supposed to book the hotels from ourselves or will it be done
 by school administration? I am looking forward to hearing from you.

Yours faithfully
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